Great work, Alana. Very creative idea. Well done.
Well punctuated today, just check the ending where you change tense.
I love the bit where the wind roars and whips the face – this is a great piece of description. Well done!
What a descriptive 100 word challenge, Alana! I really love how you have used dialogue to help us learn how the main character is feeling – it really helped me get inside her head. Keep up the excellent writing!
Excellent work, I really enjoyed this one. Well done!
Very good work Alana. well done!
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Great work, Alana. Very creative idea. Well done.
Well punctuated today, just check the ending where you change tense.
I love the bit where the wind roars and whips the face – this is a great piece of description. Well done!
What a descriptive 100 word challenge, Alana! I really love how you have used dialogue to help us learn how the main character is feeling – it really helped me get inside her head. Keep up the excellent writing!
Excellent work, I really enjoyed this one. Well done!
Very good work Alana. well done!